Below is an example of a TOEFL
independent essay. A TOEFL independent essay is an opinion-based essay. For
this task, you have 30-minutes to state your opinion, then support it with
examples.
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Prompt: What will your friend like
and not like about the place you call home? Use reasons and examples to develop
your argument.
What will my friend like and
not like when visiting the place I call home, New Delhi, India? Personally
speaking, I contend that my friend will like the food however he will not be
crazy about the summer temperatures or
the crowds.
My friend will like the
delicious food in New Delhi. When I am hungry, I go to Sheshraj’s, the best restaurant in New
Delhi. The prices are very reasonable and you get a lot of food. The lamb curry
is excellent as is the aloo gobi. For a good meal, my friend can spend maybe one
American dollar. Eating at Sheshraj’s will definitely give my friend a real New
Delhi experience that is both affordable and delicious.
However, my friend will not
like summer in New Delhi. The temperature can reach 120F plus the humidity is
high as well. This makes New Delhi uncomfortable in the summer. Unlike America,
air conditioning is not found everywhere in New Delhi. This is most evident on
the trains and buses. With the high temperatures and the high humidity, this
can make traveling difficult. Because of these factors, my friend may want to
avoid visiting New Delhi in the summer.
As mentioned, New Delhi is
crowded. My friend might not like this because
he comes from a small town in Connecticut, so he does not feel the pressure of
big city life. Also, he does not see any poverty because Connecticut is wealthy
unlike parts of New Delhi which are extremely poor. This might be a big shock
for my friend since he is not used to such cultural extremes.
As illustrated, there are many reasons
why my friend will like and won’t like New Delhi. However, this should not stop
him from visiting. I guarantee he will have a wonderful time.
Words: 300
Score: 5/5
Remember: A TOEFL independent essay
should be approximately 300 words.
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